Wednesday, April 1, 2009

My essay

After sitting down with Hank, he gave me some insightful ideas of how to expand on some of the ideas while making them funnier. The part that made me feel better about my paper was hearing Hank's laugh/chuckle at my paper. Hearing him laugh allows me to continue to write without feeling like it is an awful paper and stop caring how well I do with it.

One of the ideas that helped me make it funnier was that I just kept telling a story and expanded on the spots that I personally thought was funny without thinking about intentionally making it funny. The hilarity in it just came out without really trying. (I know this seems difficult to understand..sorry about that)

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